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in time i should leave you merry,
in the part of hope your skin is drawn
and hung

go now, I have no eyes for yours at all ,
no stark plea
the shape of a wave
underneath a shell

pain cannot be shared and go,
til we are wolves that turn to boys
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*i-am-a-bridgewalker Dec 23, 2011  Student Writer
this is absolutely beautiful.
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Mood: Wow! ~Elmara Dec 10, 2010  Student Writer
no stark plea
the shape of a wave
underneath a shell


:heart:
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`vespera Sep 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"I have no eyes for yours at all ,"

did you mean to have the space before the comma?
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mmmmm wolf boys.
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"I have no eyes for yours at all"

You sneaky son-of-a-...
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~oalicein Sep 1, 2010  Student Artisan Crafter
the (increasing?) sparseness of the second half, more specifically the middle, give that ocean-wave motion, not too mention the shape of the physical poem. the heavy title just drags me to the depths of the ocean, sir. really flannerly of you.
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other men and sometimes women.(in response to your 'ey who needs um!)
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`Amberlouie Aug 29, 2010  Professional Writer
"in the part of hope your skin is drawn/and hung", omg...the poet in me just gave me wonderful butterflies. Very much like this. Verymuch. x
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:iconandicent:
thanks dearie.
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